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bsgsix ([personal profile] bsgsix) wrote in [personal profile] alycewilson 2020-11-28 08:57 pm (UTC)

I love how you added the photos here; not that the story needed the enhancement, but it's enjoyable to see the things which you have spoken about!

I'm a sucker for a solid last line, which you provided here. Perhaps, in this case, that's because I have no way to locate my paternal lineage past my birth father, but regardless - this is all a fantastic tie into the bridge of your past, and how, going forward, you are bridging the gaps. I cannot imagine the work that must be, but I also cannot imagine the joy it must bring at times, too.

I also love the quip between you and your brother, being full of wine and wisdom and yourself. That really stuck out to me. :)

Excellent, friend. I enjoyed this - the use of this type of dialogue, the history, and the well-crafted words to tell your story. Wonderful.

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