I loved this, especially, "Our kids, curious at first, soon soured on the adventure." Yeppers, been there, lived that! LOL
One of the things I really enjoy about your poetry is that it tells an unambiguous story. Sure, poetry with mysterious/multiple meanings can also be fun, but me, I'm a sucker for a well told story!
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Date: 2024-08-16 09:43 pm (UTC)From:on the adventure." Yeppers, been there, lived that! LOL
One of the things I really enjoy about your poetry is that it tells an unambiguous story. Sure, poetry with mysterious/multiple meanings can also be fun, but me, I'm a sucker for a well told story!
Great entry.
Dan